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Voted For: XxXtayve
even if the bunner on my hip, ya nose still gonna "smell da Glock".. bro
cuz like ya sister boyfrined, when i bust in ya crib ya sis i'll be like so?
1/10 weak opener
u gay herb i'll tan ya hide like leather in friction
my gat'll split u stiff into "four-kast" like a weather prediction *ha*
1/10
i'll drown ya face in-dirty-water, cuz ya nasty flow i'll leave u murked-mate
plus the only thing mentaly "ill" about u, is that u stoled rhyme from the 3ed-grade
2/10
i could read ya shit "Fifty" times, N it still wouldnt "Make-Sence"
I Quake-Menz, the closest this cat got to "underground" was freestyling in hes basement
1/10
ya punches were weak ya wordplay wasent there and ya structure wasent that good but it was bout the best thing u had goin for you on this drop. You could really use some elevation before u answer 2 another battle
Intensify Effect?..thats how u getting murcked by this oustanding VET..and I’m doing this with no REGRETS (1)
3.10
son take this Spit as a 1000 holes in ya CHEST + bloods all over ur VEST,next time think twice b4 ge’in on the NET... (2)
2/10
723 POSTS..no change..you still a JOKE,you'r lines remind me of a gay in a BLOW..you would be "booed" at if this was a SHOW (3)
4/10
you aint in no CREW..nigga get a fucking CLUE..u suck and u SCREWED.cant u find somethingelse to DO? (4)
2/10
(he aint in no crew and in his profile he didn’t put whats he does..no work …nothing)
you puches r just like and old man MOUTH...how u xpeact to hurt me when u aint even got a teeth to brag ABOUT? (5)
3.10
he dosend even know wherre the fuck he FROM...you battleing me is like putting a pole up ya tinny bum BUM..(6)
2/10
(in his profile he didn’t put where he from)
8lines and im leaving peeps asking your wherre about...y'all gatta know he's right herre in the cats mouth.. (7)
2/10
i done with BUSTING YOU..next time i bitch slap think twice 'cos i'd keep CRUSHING YOU..now lets see if this spit aint worth saying "I’M SONING YOU"?
3/10
ya punches were all kinda played and simple and ya structure loses u points u need 2 even them out more try
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not 2 stretched and not 2 short and um u can use some better vocab in wording your set up and then your punch
it wasent the best from u but u get the win cuz your comp dropped more horrible
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