Voted For: Triple_N

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..laugh at ya u, i rule-ya-chances, my hits gunna trade off ya like trade with [pool'd-witd frances!]|..I'm sick wit it, i'll leave this ['punch line empty'] like full bladders at [school-dances!!]1
decent opener...kind corny...

..ya up on me, nah i'll leave ya health-unsteady, cas i hit from all sides with ya see like im [stealth-ready!]|..this dude sorry, i would take him and put an end(N) to em but he did it to [himself-already!!]2
forced rhyming...punch didnt hit that hard...it was decent but nothing special

..take me i'll break this guy into twig-u-hoe, call me an artist, cas i'll make ['triple n collide into the wall'] n leave him tated to it like how his [fuckin sig-shows!!] 3
forced rhyming...decent punch it was kinda cool

..fuck you, i;ll take it easy on before ya shook, just scare ya like big dudes with [coat-looks!]|..i'll unload on triple, n put have more ['bullet holes in'][ him than [spiral note-books!] 4
there arent bullet holes in spiral notebooks...i know what youre saying but it wasnt very hard hitting

..last bar you ain't worth it, so im rush-in-my-work, my hits are crazy they come [snuff-in-with-hurt!]|..gift'd t's up, playin golf but i'll t gettin [rock'd n tag's] more than air [brush-in-shirts!!]
blah...wasnt feelin it

your verse was ok against a noob but dont bring that against a vet maine...i was feelin parts of it but most of it was just blah...structure was fucked...it was ok..


Triple_N
He has a inferiority complex due to his puberty stall
Cuz he could fumble twice an still not drop his balls
basic rhyming but funny..cool idea

He's a good samariton, makes sure da starvin' don't bicker
Da hungry ain't gotta wait cuz his verses create "snickers"
blah...second line pretty good

U "reside" in "shit" then wonder why all ya verses "stink"
If u dream of win, u need to do like "ya ego" an "see a shrink"
ha...nice punch

Ya lines have "loose ligaments" they must do yoga
Verses generate as much heat as monks dat forgot their toga
cool first line once i got it...second line...ha nice try...

Your fully aware that you'll never be considered a vet
But u don't mind cuz your "gift" is to up your opponents recs
ha...pretty good


not your best shit but good enough for the win here...o.k. punches here at least they made sense without having to go back and read them..


->>v/Triple_N

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