^this guy is just a rank freeposter he sucks to haha but anyway down to the feedback deisel you got some alright metas but you need some stucture and vocab real bad i kno this guy on this site named NoMercy and he is 14 and he could beat you.
and i kno cuz im his best freind named Ye Htaik im asain and most people think im cool cuz me and NoMercy are going out with black gurls but anyway there you go but i suck so i cant say to much anymore