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Old 09-14-04, 09:16 PM   #18
Turnheads
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Voted For: NoMercy

Lightnin verse
I split ya like a pussy cause you gettin a lil mushy/
I thought yous was shaved, but ya pubes was all bushy/
2/10 u a nasty lil man lol
You talk alot of shit but you never back it up/
I read ya fuckin lines, confused like what the fuck/
2/10 hmmm...
Ya flow is garbage, ya soundin retarded and foolish/
I keep it gangsta, like a nigga I am toolish/
0/10.. braggin....yawn
You dick ridin bitch on the PSA/
But don't eva fuck wid a nigga from the Oaktown bay/
2/10 blah..
Oaktown hold it down for my crew, 4-0-8/
Ya head is full of air, and I'm here to deflate/
3/10 um ok punches
Ya body full of bull, hollow tips and seemen/
I eat beef, nigga yousa veegan/
0/10 wtf is veegan? haha makin up new words.
You don't want war nigga I'm a rebel/
Have you hit puberty? your voice is all treble/
1/10 ... enough said.
No bass in out your face, you sound like a chick/
So in the words of Luda, get off the T.I.P of my dick/
4/10 the last verse was ok

overall 2.3/10 after all the shit talkin.. u failed homey... this was below average.. u need help and work on wordplay, vocab, verbals, disses and everythin else..and ull be ok

I could sweep you “5-0” now you kno what i can do some people say im like a “grimreaper”/(1)
This battle was over before it “started” now you even in more deeper/.(2)
3/10 hmm.. "I could sweep you “5-0”" lol u said that in our battle.. but it proved false.
Ill be the 2nd one to force you to lose but realy I cant say that to much cuz its just an opinion/(3)
But yer realy getting annoying with yer “freeposting” in my threads you like a annoying “minion”/.(4)
4/10 blah.. some good verbals
Spitin words I do with ease but to say you done fast that’s just an “opinion” of the mind/(5)
Catch you in the back thinking yer “gangsta” but you not even a threat to mankind/.(6)
3/10 thsi was ok..
Hittin you up with words that come from my “brain” make you snitch like a “coward”/(7)
But all as you are is a faker and a crapy “playa” like juwan howard/.(8)
0/10 ... juwan howard?? ..
You got nothing on me cuz you got no “vocab” or anything not even yer own hart with a bit of independence/(9)
So that makes yer style die down so fast its like you “killed” it and then you got no people for yer sheet full of all yer attendance/.(10)
5/10 stretched out like fuck.. but it was good..

overall 4.5, u had little wordplay,few pucnhes But ok vocab, ur flow was kinda messy, some weak disses ur probably savin it for someone worthy..

even tho we don't agree most the time.. u took this battle mafucka. hahah