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Old 09-14-04, 09:57 PM   #28
~Luciano~
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From: $.W Detroit
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Voted For: Big Bad Wolf



listen wolfy, Ur Done, without me even having to 'lift~mah~wrist'/
Ur wack dogg, ur punches wouldnt be 'hot' even if u 'fried~ur~fist'/
3/10
Im the big playa, I even get hoes over the internet just get them in 'chat'/
While the only time you can 'Hit pussy', is if you kicked your own 'cat'/
2/10
I'ma show you how to 'speak~ya~mind' and flex this shit son/
But I wont worry bout crew votes,cuz no ones stupid enough to let u in one/
1/10
His past battles are all wack lines and 'played~out~punches'/
He'd bite my shit for his audio but he "afraid~of~da~tongue~twist'/
2/10

ya punches were kinda played and simple and ya wordplay was ok u can use some elevation tho overall u had a decent drop but u didnt come very hard at all
1/10

Your 8 wins were your 8 minutes of fame, fuck ya name
Blow ya brains and change “White_tee”, from plain to stained
3/10
Yo catch me in his hood and see dis bitch when I drive past
he’ll die fast, fuck blades I kill bills hearts wit triple bypass
3/10
hes a fag, not classified as “mc” but a fruit of loom
u didn’t expect to get merked today well… u shoulda knew
3/10
your punches like planes wit terrorist, they not landing
dis dudes pantin, cuz i got gatz to make u stop standin
2/10
your raps are scraps and they off to tha trashcan
don’t matter if you wear white, u still ignored like cabs do a blackman
5/10

ya punches werent much better but u came more clever and more original u could uses some complexity and ya struc was good but in some spots seemed stretched and forced
could use some elevation

overall this battle was ok but u both can use some elevation and some tight complexity and harder and more clever punches
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