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Old 09-14-04, 10:16 PM   #24
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Voted For: Ice Pick



smell pussy when he pickin around it becomes a potnet aroma
u 24,dummy post ya diploma...
2/10
......but me i just post punchlines to leave the post in a koma
blow ya head off an laugh now thats faceless entertain-ment
rvs sickest? nigga you aint it...
you gettin out of character like skitzoz at a court araignment
2/10
your flow like unreasonable promises its bound to be broken
hes with gay marriages y u think him an his homo verse is elopin
2/10
claimin u at work when ya past experience is a rap board artist
u never goin platinum ya album might make rust thats the farthest
1/10

ya punches were kinda simple didnt really have any complexity or hard wordplay here and ya struc was bout tha best thing u had goin in this drop could use some more elevation
altho your gettin lotz better


Ghost Yo verse was like indians rubbin sticks...but the fire ain't startin
"Ghost" rhymes is grease fires...."mines" is pure arson.
2/10
Bout to increase ya fan-base...when I leave ya face on a milk carton
September 6th....I'll beat you "Daly" like Carson.
2/10
Total request....fuck ya car...I'mma total ya chest
My first four bars fuckin totaled ya best.
1/10
You ain't "hard" when you spit...the only thing "harsh" is ya breath
Ya rhyme was as strong as a crackhead's max on the bench press
2/10
Deep down In ya heart you know skills are basic at most
He's Not "tight" enuff.....that's why his name is GHOST
4/10

ya punches were weak and simple i figured u would of came alot harder than this u had nice complexity and structure u could use a lil elevation in ya delieverence and choice of beter setups
cuz u are basic in those departments
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