Thread: G:Deuce vs L.I.
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Old 09-14-04, 10:35 PM   #43
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Voted For: Geuce

this was a tough battle to decide on...such different trails of the topic...g:deuce i was nt feelin the intro of yours,im not sure what it was ,i jus was'nt feeling it but around the middle of your verse it started going some where n liked your jesus line thought that was a strong point.overall nice peice n it seemed well done....structure n all did'nt bother me cause the content was there..but L.I.your topic was koo yet kinda simple but well done i liked the flow it kept me interested but your finishing lacked n so did your basic originality for this topic.....i found i enjoyed g:deuce verse more cause it was stronger in the imagery department n had much more complexity throughout it...RTFhttp://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=149439
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