Better than you..
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This was feedback posted for Tha Flash
IP:
Dirty Money- ur verse was pretty decent. some good punches and ur structure was aiight.
Fav Line-letting you no her tit's is so fake they wouldn't pass the medal detecter//
this was a funny line although the thought was pretty hollow.
The Flash- this verse was better then dirtys in my eyes. i felt the punches were harder, the vocab was better. u need to work on ur structure tho.
if i could vote on this i would give it to flash
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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