this was nice hazy....but also very dark, grim and hard hitting in a way...you depicted stromg emotions...and some very good imagery...had to read it twice (not too reader friendly...but its all good..)....

...but yeah...i definetly felt this....you always have a good deep flow to all your pieces (i dont mean rhyming, even though that is a bit of it....but more so continuity and structure of the words and...well i cant quite explain it fully...but i think you know what i mean...)....

anyway....respect...