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Old 09-15-04, 07:48 AM   #9
Terumoto
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Voted For: Quick Witted

most:
dope vocab. Got mad potential with ya raps, but you gotta learn content. Your shit was good, but it was a lot of self glorification etc. and not really many punches.. ya know what i mean?

Quick:
nice punches, flow, metas n wordplay.. until the last 3 bars where you fell off n lines got real bad.. but you took this one cos ya punches were good

btw most.. i reckon when u get a bit better youll be a topical kinda mc.. like poet .. cos ur style is similar

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