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Old 09-15-04, 10:49 AM   #43
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Voted For: intensify effect

dis was so fuckin wkack i almost wasnt gonna vote
but what da fuck? ill vote anyway!

RW...
dis bitch couldnt "intensify" an "effect" of his weak punches/
if he packed his fist wit "shots" of 151 or instant concussions/
good concept...whack delivery...


IE...
ya name raw killa-but u mainly bitch.
N Last time ya gay ass saw a 'girl bare chest' it was grizzly tits *ha*
sounded good but execution of da flowm was whack...

nows when dis battle really gets bad!

RW...
time 2 put dis bitch unda da "wing"/
like a "father n son kind of" thing/ (lol)
advice: dont "lol" unless its funny...whack

IE...
if u spit with ya whole click... B.A.M, u'll suck like a gun on lips full of lead
boy u went the wrong way, only good steps u'll think of on ya mind is me standing on ya head
whack...no flow...mad stertched...

RW...
tlkn bout how bad he wanna callabo 2getha/
then tlk shit bout how he can rhyme betta/
even if its true...its whack...

IE...
this battle like sadam N bush...something u should of avoided
cuz my concepts sick, N you couldn’t flip shit with back-fiering toilettes
some of this was played(no hate we all do it)but u made it ur own wit dat second line bout da toilets...lol...

RW...
i "intensify" dis bitches verse wit hollywood special "effects"/
give him a star role in da next friday after next after next/
fill dis bitch thug wit slugs so he can die in da "projects"/
n change dis "challenged" rappaz name 2 "decrease in effect"/
was da friday line supposed to be an insult?
da second bar in dis sequence was super lyrical ur nice!
........
nahh!kikikikkkklol...it was wost den da rest of ur shit...AND DAT WAS DA CLOSER!

IE...
ya web site a link for the retarts N impaired
my rhymes tight, u'll have to drop lines of hair to even compare!!
this was bad! da bad kind of bad, not slang 4 good...
hair is thin not tight n neither was dat bar...

IE...
u needed a bitch-slap, asking 4 a battle wanting to see-me-later
when ya punches couldnt even ball-up to swing like ya avator...
hardly rhymed, not iteresting at all...
AND DAT WAS DA CLOSER!

THIS WAS SO SHITTY IM NOT GONNA BREAK DOWN THA CATAGOERIES...I.E. WON BECAUSE OF THA LINE ABOUT "TOILETTS"

IF U DONT LIKE MY OPINION,TO BAD.I HOPE THEY MAKE BOTH U BETTER...
U GUYS NEED SOME FLOW N DEFFINITLY WAAAAAY BETTER
CREATIVITY...

fuck i.e....fuck raw killa...im out!
peace
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