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Old 09-15-04, 11:05 AM   #26
Dirty Nigga
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Voted For: Ice Pick

aiiiiiiight

ice got this, better flow, more complex rhyme scheme, an some hella hard hittin punches...

lacked humour ice, but not many people care for humour in rhyes, but i think humour brings the best out of disses...

but on the whole nice drop (loved the missionary position thing, pure genius lol)

ekademic, ya flow was aight..

ya came a lil too elementary if ya feel me?
ya opener was BLAH, an ya finisher wasnt that much better, openers n finishers are sumthin that catch attention, so work on that yea dogg?
nice rhyme tho, just could improve, structure, vocab n metas...
no hate, just bein real with ya'll...

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