Your flow was good( See I hate reading shit that u cant decipher the flow from, while u readin it.) It painted good pictures as well, I was able to visualize what u talked about with no problem. It definitely wasnt boring reading either, it kept my attention all the way through. Yah it was definitely good reading, and look like u could put this to the right trak and have somethin. So I give u 10/10 on this one, for sho.