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Old 09-15-04, 01:06 PM   #13
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Voted For: Triple_N

Hmmm.....I wasn't too impressed with this one.

Triple had a few nice punch lines and overall his shit flowed well. Some of his punches just seemed to lack the power to hit hard. Nice verse though.....just gotta be a little harder hitting

Phantom came with some of the most played lines I've ever seen. I mean honestly, do you really think you came up with that master bait line all by yourself? Oh, and that Kool-aid/punch-line one too.....WOW! Plus you had a lot of really stretched lines in there....at this stage you should be way past that stretched style.....overall I felt you could have done much better.

Vote - Triple_N
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