Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

wow, nice verse both of you.....
maku~your verse had nice flow and structure, it was more in depth then LE's verse, and had creative punches as well, a good personal about the thread, but the other could have been better, because it was on a crew member, not him, but ok, i liked the opener a lot, it was a nice starter and you came into this with some intensity, i especially liked the last 3 lines and the funny punch "you couldnt be a rider if bill gates cosigned a car for you", funny line......
LE~you verse had good flow as well, kind of shoet but you siad a lot in it, with the personals, nice closer too, but i vote for maku because of his content and descriptive vocab.....nice job both

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