wow, this was great, your vocab was very good, and descriptive, you seem to have a knack for this kind of writing as well as battles, i liked the subject too, i feel you on this, true scenes as well in this piece, you should add it to the open mic forum as well,because it seemed more like that type of piece, but awesome job, i'd like to see more...pc

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