This was a short emotional drop, work on spelling and structure a bit, but other then that, leaves me with some questions though,because it seems the content was changing a bit every line, the topic would shift, i'm not sure if you were upset and just wanted to drop something quick, or what, but i liked it for a first poem, well i'm considering its your first since your new here, but try to stay on topic as well too, but keep it up!!!!

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