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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP:
Voted For: Triple_N
at first i claimed you was the best, but then realized ya borin...
and knocked on so much wood, i thought i became a mormon...
2/10
on "inner demons" you chorus was worse, than the little bastards fate...
so keep 'fishin' for 'hook's............ will you try to masterbate...(master bait)
1/10
this ll be a piece of cake. me try? bitch hardly...
tou bout as wanted here as the fat kid at birthday partys...
1/10
its like shaq couldnt take the heat, and melted in crunchtime...
battlin this kool-aid addict, suckin dick for 'punch-lines'...
3/10
the cheap wins you be gettin, dont make you magnificent...
cuz i could beat you right now, and it wouldnt even be significant...*
2/10
imma just drop a quick key, and let him get beat in 3 minutes...
aint it funny how i use my "comp" to defeat......what he isnt...
2/10
youre just the vet that never made it cuz you aint got the mastery, you think...
ill just have to cannibalize you, and use your brain fluids for a drink...
2/10
youre verse didnt cut it, just after the first or letter or two...
i got niggas who wanna be me that are 10 times better than you...
1/10
Never, Never, Never <----- thats about when youll be on my level...
you coulda been chillin with the gods, but had to follow the devil...**
1/10
youre chances of 'changin' ya loss to me are definatly 'remote'...
ya master of punchlines credential, has just been lyrically revoked...
3/10
Punches were there but they were all simple and ya wordplay was ok words used over and over again
meta's were kinda there but they didnt come hard
Personals werent there and ya complexity was average
structure was good and so was ya vocab
They should create a thread for dickrider award
Cuz u turned looch's dick into an ambilical cord
3/10
Ya verses are a thesis for proctology class
Ya flow & structure support inner workings of ass
1/10
My flow "percipitates" on da verses u facilitate
Make ya "pay for each land" like my punches were real estate
4/10
Mine's so outshines yours dat I already won twice
Ya punches are "bitter salesman" they jus "act nice"
2/10
This battle's a side show, it need to charge admission
Cuz to see ya talent is like "ya name" a apparition
3/10
Ask this "A.I." "Da answer" to his wackness
U winnin's like playin' pick 3 wit 4 digits, hapless
2/10
This is as competive as Shaq vs Stuart Little on da pine
Cuz da wackness u posess is more repetitve than "time"
4/10
U think ya verse is ill?...a real battle ya-owe-me
I'm da fork poppin' the bubble in this "fried bologny"
3/10
U should lube ya words maybe they'll flow smoother
Rhymes could "fire at da masses" an not be crowd mover
2/10
As an "appliance aisle" an wouldn't habor 1 fan
Ya verses represent "a lose" like a widow's wedding ban
2/10
ya punches were good werent that clever but they got the job done
ya complexity was good and so was ya structure
ya wordplay was good and u used good choice of vocab
ya meta's were good overall due 2 ya punches and wordplay
u get my vote
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