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Old 09-15-04, 06:04 PM   #24
Ice Pick
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Voted For: hotshh!

OK this is how it goesz,,


KUSTOM, not bad but them lines were fucking super stretched and ya structure to ya post was all fucked up and made it un enjoyable to read.... SOme desacent punnches that were there just not that strong.... Personal department wasnt that good either,,,,,




Hotshhh, butter flow to it, better punches use of vocab and wordplay, Liked how ya played the JDOT shit.......
Me? Damage and Hurt You..Scared..Panicking in Rehearsals..
Leave U 'Stiff For Acting'....Like Maniquins in Commercials!!
J Dot* as Denzel Washington....U 'Out Of Time'......
he had to change his name To finally See Dollar Signs!$$$

That was fuckin dope


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