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Voted For: young_buckshot
eveO-i wansnt feelin ya rhyme at all try to end your sentences wit a rhymin word it makes it easier to read.....but those multies did not go unoticed good work there....you opener was wack...your closer wasnt all that bad..but every where in between need alot of work try goin to the tutorals and study them theres no shame in that i do it too........................Young-first off try usin more than two rhymin words and expand your vocab. it will help you elevate ALOT.....aaight punches.....no multies.....but alot of aaight personals....to get more personals go to his profile and use for example his posts per day and say he's a freeposter....just anything that seems off key and the same to you eveO........my Vote/Young
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