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Old 09-15-04, 06:48 PM   #15
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Voted For: E Looch



It's RV's biggest Ducker, he's the master of Duck and Run
Carsonjet on his dick so hard, so thats how you got your 1's
^^aight,ok opener6/10
Looch your counterfeit, steady pressin your own RV dollars
Simple fact your getting paid from the art of spit and swallow
^^wasnt feelin it,5/10
Chryme Sindicate's your crew, so now i guess your John Goddi
I've seen your battle stats, It's like a list of "WHOSE NOBODY"
^^nice,7.5/10
So jump up to the plate Looch if you really feeling FROGGY
I still can't believe you got beat by a kid named realistdoggy
^^lol..7.5/10
Your like a rookie corner in the NFL, and I'm like Randy Moss
While Im catching touchdown passes, your catching a Loss
kinda weak closer,6.5/10

overall ok verse,was'nt all hard hiting punches but it was decent 32.5/50

forfiet kid ya skill level still aint been raised like orphan kids
now u got less signs of life then posters that praise abortion bids
^^nice opener,8/10
u ridiculous ya style still phasin just a meek conspicuous abrasion
his illness is hard to spot like Eminem as a lentiginous caucasian
^^decent,7/10
sharkin a real artists name paints a picture of him bein a stan*
callin my name an ya punches breezin by only proves your a fan
^^ok,7/10
holds up white sheets like its his national flag he already surrenderin
when u make a cover it'll be a funeral program so ya fame u hinderin
^^ok,6.5/10
if u claim u won hold up u got it backwards now like ya tite game**
not acknowledged hes a shame even admins dont captilize his name***
^^nice 9/10

overall 35.5/50

both were nice verses,props ta both,but looch had more content in his verse n originality with punches was deffinately evident,i got all the personals n punches but the best was looch's closer,nicely worded n delivered well,vango,most of your punches were played concepts..both had good flow n good structure nice battle...........

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