Wow, rapverse has changed since the summer. Anyhow, so you need to watch out for your spelling only because since this is over a computer when we read it it messes up the flow. This line we ill: The only way you could match my skill is when you literaly copy me. Those enterior rhymes gave you a nice edge: will, still, skill..."punch's will leave u short on breath like midget's on asma" very nice!
I liked what I read, I hold you to high standards as a vet. Overall structure was on lock, punches were pretty good. Not too much played verse (although this you could have done without "my lines shine, rhyme after rhyme to go and blind your eyes") 8/10

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