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Old 09-15-04, 07:17 PM   #14
big GZ
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u really shouldn't include a local celebrity in your verse...otherwise your verse was all around just better with the punchlines...MOST, you had nice wordplay but that was about it...try to include more punchlines and meta4's.
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