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Old 09-15-04, 07:41 PM   #16
Epical
..Friends Change..
 
This was feedback posted for Elusiv G

IP:

one sided battle

Punches- G
Flow- G
Multis- G
Multas- G
Personals- G
Wordplay- G

G nice verse. hard, connectin punches, pretty much good all round.

yung too elementary compared to G. not hard punches, no personals, and u need to use wut u get, not go min.

G:
"i leave niggaz feelin jiggie, rippin tha stage like i was biggie//
u shudnt test me mothafucka, its like touchin a blak mans radio, its stupid, jus ask chris tucker//" nice closer.

yung:

yo i step up to da stage start to spilt my dope stuff//
he spilts his wack rhymes they so wack it makes him look lyk a puff//" eh ok punch. best i found

v/G if i could vote