E-Style, Bitch.
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This was feedback posted for Diabolic_aka_134
IP:
aiiiiight
diabolics in my crew...
an i'ma give my honest opinnon on this boys verse...
some shit was humouress n the punches we're tiiight as hell..
but dia, a few flaws, (no hate just bein real n trynna help) but yea...the flaws were u stretched a couple of lines, an these people on the site try an stay away from the gun talk....but u used the gun lines kinda effectively, but try to stay away from that topic unless its in relation to a diss, ya know? like the persons name your battlin is a ''thug name'' but on the whole, nice drop...you'll see ya rhymes will get alot better as time goes on an the more practice u get the more elevation that will happen....but for ya first battle, the structure was top notch n the humouress punches will get you the win...
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