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Old 09-15-04, 07:49 PM   #7
Dirty Nigga
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This was feedback posted for Diabolic_aka_134

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aiiiiight

diabolics in my crew...

an i'ma give my honest opinnon on this boys verse...

some shit was humouress n the punches we're tiiight as hell..

but dia, a few flaws, (no hate just bein real n trynna help) but yea...the flaws were u stretched a couple of lines, an these people on the site try an stay away from the gun talk....but u used the gun lines kinda effectively, but try to stay away from that topic unless its in relation to a diss, ya know? like the persons name your battlin is a ''thug name'' but on the whole, nice drop...you'll see ya rhymes will get alot better as time goes on an the more practice u get the more elevation that will happen....but for ya first battle, the structure was top notch n the humouress punches will get you the win...
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