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Old 09-15-04, 07:58 PM   #50
Parallel
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yo i kno my lines are streched and im young but i havent been rappin long this is my first day on this site i was in rb for a bit tho but im kinda audio but non realy ill be audiod later in my life i need to elavate a bit on soem things not uch but heres a tryout verse 6 lines check it out:

Yes people call me “Exclusive” you wanna kno why? Its cuz im “abusive”/(1)
When I rap that’s me, but when I here you rap you think to much it makes you “sound” elusive/.(2)
Ill be in the background of the stage watchin you spit rhymes people sayin he must be “embarrassed”/(3)
Its me in the back don’t mistake it cuz ill be laughen and ill win becuz im a straight up serious “terrorist”/.(4)
Erasen yer record and wreken yer record would be my “dream” I would sand up to that “strong”/(5)
This happened fast cuz you start “beef” fast plus everyone agrees with me yer “wrong”/.(6)
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