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Old 09-15-04, 08:24 PM   #19
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Voted For: Quick Witted

aight quick witted got this hands down,structure n flow was iffy but you had punches unlike the other verse,personals were ok,lol.you wrote alot more than was needed but thats koo,young buckshot your only bar that could be considered a punch was your opener n it was weak ..elevate on ya punches n complexity...
return the favour..
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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149668
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!