The pain hits me, But i'm fighting, just dying to live,
I'd do anything in the world to spend another day with my kids,
The thought of their smiling faces, the laughs we always have,
How could they grow up, knowing they lost a dad?
Pain rushes through my body I weakly try to stand,
Blood rushing from the wounds, bullets burning like a brand,
I attempt to utter 'help', it comes out in mear whispers,
I try again to scream, thinking they must not be good listeners,
Thoughts rush through my head, how can my family love me like this?
I put the battle on hold, begin to reminisce,
The times we'v spent, but now god's chose it to be over,
The lifeline ends, hands, arms and legs, turn colder
It's for the best I say, as i move towards the light,
I'll love you forever, I whisper through the night.

Yeh so, that was my first topical, just kinda keyed sumthin up, I dunno whether its good, or whatever, not on form tonight but yeh...I tried

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