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Old 09-15-04, 09:17 PM   #37
E Looch
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

close battle to me

Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions
You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions
decent opener first line was decent wording messed it up the punch was ok easy wordplay

You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's
lol.. ight punch and set up good flow
Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech
umm this was filler i hope weak attemtp at a punch had wordplay but i dont think the punch connected very well brah flow was coo again
Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's"
u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals
lol.. not a bad closer good similie in first line punch was decent basically sayin it wont never happen so not very original

I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets
Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz...
first line was ok the punch was nice made me laugh at that shit
I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper...
um weak bars honestly tried at his name but the punch didnt connect to me decent wordplay though
This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude
Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food...
lol..nice flow above average punch wasnt that good though
Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines
I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime...
fist line was nice but the punch fucked it up could have killed him with that set up but messed it up with that punch

overall close battle but p dizzle came with more attempts at personals some connected some was way off but still had an overall better verse to me trooped ya shit was coo wit all the similies no real personals but in the closer everything else u just stuck his name in it neither really had real strong punchs to mebut close battle here ya'll both about on the same level

nice battle kids
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