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This was feedback posted for Turnheads
IP:
weak battle.
punches- Head
personals- Head
mulits- Head
multas- neither
word play- Head
Head u had decent stuff, but the punches were kinda weak. U had multis, and personals.
Succ u had a good idea for a verse, but your wordin and vocab sucked. U woulda won if u had re worded it.
Head:
" Use viagra u still couldn't "Stand up" '4 urself'," i dont see it rhymin but it wuz a good idea.
Succ:
" You might think you're 'high',but not on the charts...
Even if you were a surgeon,you couldn't 'own hearts'..." agin if u had re worded it woulda been good punch.
v/ Head if i could vote
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