..Friends Change..
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This was feedback posted for SLicK~SKiLLz
IP:
one sided battle.
punches- Slick
personals- Slick
multis- Slick
multas- Yung (cuz he tried em)
word play- Slick
Slick nice verse. Keep bringin hard punches, u kinda slack off in a line. U may think oo one line, but one line can help u win or lose.
Yung- weak punches, elementary rhymes, im not big on struture but i kno some people r so work on structure. Lotta stretched lines.
Slick:
" when i seen u i seen a free ~win~ ~proov-in~ that u suck and u showin no ~competition~" nice punch.
Yung:
"go back to the crummy streetz you fuckin hobo
go back to fuckin yo men you fuckin homo" not great. talkin bout bein gay, *yawn* notin original.
v/Slick if i could vote
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