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This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
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wow....too much on both parts. both of you need to slim your verses down like crazy. it gets boring after a while to read redundant shit.
ekademic - yo...i stopped readin your shit becuase it got boring man. stop using little words to rhyme like "deny it, like it"...condense it to punch hard man
ice pick - you had some nice ones...but if you were a hard mc your rhymes would be understood without having to explain shit in parenthesies. plus your lines are way too long...what kind of beat was your head flowin to
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