YoO Rook...
......^I always call you that and its not even your name anymore..hope you dont mind..
......Anyway..I said it before and it still stands..you are one of my favorite reads in open mic..ah, fuck it..you ARE my favorite read in open mic..This piece was nothin less than incredible..All your verses scream illness, in my ears, but this one was exceptionally well written..Every single bar packed contemplative word-play and reflective lines that just made my jaw drop. I got lotsa quotes, so bear with me:

1stverse:
>Time Arrangements Are Put Forward As Consequentially Submitted..
As Drowning Hands On Clocks Was Permitted In A Future Vision..
I Take A Long Gaze At Tha Air As My Life Dilatorily Decreases..
Each Second Is Like An Ancient Song Inside Broken Into Pieces..

>40 Damn Miles Is My Location, Tha Belly Of Nothing, Infinity..
Adjacent Sides Move Differently, But Yet Somehow In Symmetry..

^Tight.
2ndverse:

>Tha Author Of An Unfilled Auto-Biography, Tha Pages Are Blank..
Trying To Be Tha Drama On An Outer Space Voyage Yet Still Sank..
Quils Yank My Whole Anantomy Towards A Special Type Of Plain..
My Views On Life Begin At Omega So They Can Never End In Vain..

>Something I Could Never Modify, But Life Isn't Meant For Change..
Country Was In A Frenzied Craze, I Couldnt Reach From My Range..
I Guess Im Obsolete As I Search For Tha Meaning Of My Existence..
Billions Of Ears, Im Guessing That Nobody Even Wants To Listen..

^That was mad dramatic. Very ill. (i wanna listen, dammit)

3rdverse:
>Mirrors Only Reflect Tha External Happiness If You Like Smiling..
Inner Child Consistantly Crying As My Emotions Keep On Lying..

>If Ever I Made It To That Glade, Victory Billowed By Tha Mist..
Forced To Make Unethical Choices, In Lifes Multiple Choice Quiz..
An Outcast To Societies Raising Is How This "Felon" Was Labeled..
Both Shoulders Inhabitants Agreed Tha Answer Was On That Table..

Just Damn. You know what you wrote, so sorry for all the quotin..just wanted to show you what parts stood out to me...Anyway, whole shit was tight..You have a rare talent..You truly put knowledge to a rhyme...always a pleasure to read...stay up n keep blessin us..
Peace.