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Old 09-16-04, 01:49 AM   #18
~IiL PrOpHeT~
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like memories of past trances~ya lyrics are played out like mc hammer dances
with lack of any skills~my punchlines will end ya career faster then hanson's
^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE MAYNE AND OPENER NICE PUNCH

ya lyrics are sustaining structural damage~have ya record falling apart like the twin towers
i know u think ya big but ya not~devastating lyrics leave u living in a trailer like pierre bowers *
^^^^^^^^^ EHHHHHHH NOT AN GOOD PUNCH KINDA AN FILLER

ya shot of winning is off~kinda like parapalegic's trying to play golf
i know ya lyrics come cold~ya probably what they meant by putting ice in smirnoff
^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE WORDPLAY AND A PUNCH

like a news reporter~i wait around for the night cap (votes)
u beating me is unlikely~cause their's a better chance of stevie wonder getting his sight back
^^^^^^^^^^ HA HA NICE MAYNE (BEST PUNCH IN YO VERSE)

like specific design patterns taking from a blueprint~my lyrics put a studda in ya words like ruben **
punchlines shipping u through customs~while personals put u under my command like i'm fidel and ya cuban
^^^^^^^^^ UM KINDA AN PERSONAL PUNCH BUT NOT AN GOOD ONE

with lyrically explicit arsenals of quick witted words~i release from my tonuge
ya going for a reach ya trying~but ya punchlines don't land...not even one
^^^^^^^^^^^^ OK DAT WAS SOME FLOW GOOD

i know ya prewrite ya shit~unlike wedding vows ya words ain't connecting
like the court ordered ja i put a statment out and you'll need an order of protection ***
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD CLOSA


Quite simply Quick Witted, ya loose fitted rhymes got me agitated,
ya shits trifle, this battles mine before u got time to contemplate it,
^^^^^^^^^^^ FLOW AND A PUNCH NICE

rhymes are constipated, they burstin out with hammeroids,
i manifest raw logic, pre programmed into me kinda like multiple androids,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ LIL. VOCAB IN DER AND PUNCHES AND FLOW

i cross u out- ya signatures void, my lyrical weapons against u i just deployed,
as for woteva contingent or crew u rep for consider it destroyed.
^^^^^^^^^^^ PERSONAL AND A PUNCN PLUZ

chop off ya fingers n slit ya throat, at the mouth u foaming,
put an end to yer wack text battles, its obvious ur just cloning,
^^^^^^^^^^ PUNCH NIC EMAYNE

some other shit rapper as im zoning, on this rap shit im growing...
my verse is tight n flowing, unlike ur mediocre attempt tho u not knowing,
ur wackness is showing,a deep lesson to u unlearned im now bestowing,
^^^^^^^^^^ FLOW BUT INFANT PUNCHES (WEAK)

plus dick riding aint acceptable here, is that clear?.learn from my quotes,
next thing u b askin 'Poet' for votes,i hope ur takin notes
peep this shit as i teach ya the ways im condensending on ya,
check the lesson i taught ya, i'll scorch ya bringing torture
^^^^^^^^^^^ OK KID U PUT MY NAME ON DER WE GOTS TO BATTLE NO DOUBT ME TAKIN NOTES BLAH 7-0 YEA RIGHT

BUT DAT WAS AN PERONAL AND A PUNCH NICE MAYNE

MOST GOT DIS BY USING PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

QUICK U CAME GOOD WITH DA PUNCHES BUT I DIDNT SEEN ANY PERSONALS USE SOME PERSONALS NEXT TIME MAYNE

V-MOST

~PEACE~