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BANG, ya couldn’t kill with words if you shot one, ya punches are wack son,
Time ya rented some, kid id be rippin n dissin ya friends to but ya got none,
^^^^^^^^^^ HA NICE PUNCH AND A OPENER

You don’t bang shitwith words, ya spits would be high if delivered by birds,
ya belong ta turds n suck more dick then vacuum cleaners dat belong ta nerds,
^^^^^^^^^ GREAT PUNCH MAYNE (FIYA)

I maime this tyke wit soap, like I cleaned his throat, laughed at his no-votes,
claim you write dope?, even if I was 40/20,I still could’nt see ya wit a micro-scope
^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE CLOSA AND NICE PUNCHES THROWIN NICE

¤Å?¤? Wtf?Thats what ya mind say when you hit wit this left hand- Gettin that right will have you claimin that im nice man/ and I aint got no fans- so you better calm ya ass down and get high like afro man/ damn now I gotta wash my hands- cus ya lip got soft- like soft shell tacos fam/ Now wit my last line im'a flip this bitch- You saying my name like you my bitch/ Faggot
^^^^^^^^^^^ DIS WHOLE VERSE IT HAD PUNCHES BUT WERENT HITTING HARDER

U NEED TO FIX YO STRUTURE CAUSE IT WAS HARD TO READ DIS ONE

U NEED TO ELEVATE ON PUNCHES AND FLOW MAYNE AND STRUTURE SO...........

DAZ GETS MY VOTE BECUZ OF-PUNCHES FLOW AND WORDPAYS WAS HITTING HARDER

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