leave you rest'n pz's
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IP:
Voted For: Street poet
I got arrows that will hit you in different directions//
Artillary shed smaller than your N Sync poster collection//
^^no punch but good flow
The last thing ull hear is the fuckn trigger click//
Ironic.. uve been beatin in the day with a night stick//
^^this was koo
Ill take an egg beater and shove it into your chest//
Then youll know the true meaning of beatn to death//
^^nice..lol
This aint a battle its and abortion, cuz im killing this kid//
Your lame ass rhymes you need to "get-rid"//
^^flow fell off
This freestyle is soo good, it should be made into a song//
You wish u were a "vet", so you could take care of ur mom//
(^^^ooooOOOOoo^^^)
^^ok,but keep on topic its a battle between you n him not his mom...lol...
Yall Katz Iz Garbage Ya Level is Way Belo Mine Ur Wacknes Is Undefined-
Spit Dat Sizzlin' Shit.. Hotter then da Devil N the Sun Combined-
^^nice flow but no hard punch..
Kids Gettin Raped Quick Like Michael Jackson at a 7 year olds BurfDay-
Droppin Missiles Spit Big Lines..Look Like Fuckin Eearthquakes-
^^??.good flow but did'nt really make sense??
Get Tackled And "Caught On Ya Own Side" LIke A Touchback-
U Rushin In My Yard like dat meat comercial U Quick To Get Rushed Back-
^^iffy rhymin/back n back?.shouldnt rhyme the same word.
Playin Against Da Kid You'll Get Shook Quick Like Dem And 1 Niggaz-
Typa Ma fucka To GetUp In Ya Grill Slap U An Ask You Now What Nigga!?
^^ok.same as the line before..
Mayn You Wack Ya Raps Are Real Dirty Like A Gas Station Basket-
Im Like VampiresYou Cant Kil me I jus Keep Resurectin From My Cascatte-
^^ok
Click Of A Button n Ull Get Shut Down Nigga cheerin like I gota Tuchdown-
*POP POP* What Now!?! Kids in jail gettin raped up the butt now-hha its like dat
^^ok closer
aight this was an ok battle but you both lacked in hard hitting punches n should work on that,both had good flow but 20 grand yours fell off at points,overall pretty close...but i gave it to street poet...for a couple slightly better punches n content in verse.
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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