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Old 09-16-04, 01:42 PM   #7
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Voted For: Street poet

aight im not gonna break this down,tolerant level you came ok but alot of your shit was weak,n you did'nt match what street had in content ,wordplay,meta's n flow...no hard punches in this battle no personals...you both need to elevate on that....n keep in mind attackin a crew iun a verse when its not a crew battle isnt really a good diss,its like a mom joke...now street poet you gotta work on your structure,im not sure if its cause your capitalizin every 1st letter or wat but shorten those lines or cover them up with consistant multi's,try n make your verse presentable n not tossed all over the page.....no hate jus keep elevatin some nice stuff in both verses....
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!