Voted For: Paramik

nice battle..
my explanation no hate either str8 truth..
EMPIRE's verse.
Ya record is unimpressive i went to checked not a single vet
On R.V you hardly a 'STAR' like the 'BEATLES'when Ringo left(1)
^u don't start off tellin' ur challenger that u checked his stats.. no punch existed whatsoever.. second half not bad.. 6/10

No hope you couldnt be dope if you was a addict drug user
I can tell you whack ass from 'FL' yous a fraudalent loser(2)
^lines played for real.. not bad second line have but being sarcastic doesn't help.. 4/10

Bunch of gay guys repping A.I dont understand how you brag
Get ya dicks rubbed in homo strip clubs damn yall some fags(3)
^terrible nonsense, last line was horrible, u could have done better (i think!).. anywayz- 0/10

Dont write great you lightweight fact is that you ameatuer champ
Heavyweight elevation levatate you shouldve been warned in advance(4)
^multi first half not bad if it made better sense, JESUS! second half even worse, what happened empire? 0/10

ur score- 10/40.. u had sum really played lines which didn't help your structure is terrible quit double spacin' ya verse it's newbish.. 25%.. you had one personal throughout the whole verse.. I have seen you drop harder before, I don't know what happened this time.. you fell short, and ya vocab wasn't bad but u put it in the wrong places.. you need to work on a couple of things and the explanations didn't help ur verse out in anyway whatsoever but oh well, good luck, NEXT..

paramik..
Empire wants to impress me, claiming he elevated and improved…
But like uncertain science theories, his claiming is fully unproved.
^first half terrible way to start off, but second half recovered it, kinda funny too.. 6/10

Claims he smokes Mcs?, the only smoke you make, is from a cigar.
Fuck the force you provide, cause ya line drive is just a toy racecar.
^first half again not a real punch.. second fell off a bit also.. 4/10

So back off, you been text-injured so much that you feel the pain.
But mostly by your own punches and your malfunctioning brain.
^nice personal, followin' a "punch line", and funny.. lol 7/10

This shit’s always clinging to a loss, I'd say Empire’s just like moss.
I mean his style and personals are fake, like the T-shirts at Ross.
^best bar in the battle.. it woulda made a great opener, but nice.. lmao 9/10

Can’t get through this battle, the win’s blocked from him like a clot…
Ya hope to win, and the wins ya got, come empty like ya sig spot.
^first half, fell off somewhat.. second half not true about his wins but the emptiness and sig spot came correct.. not the best closer but enuff to take the battle i think.. 6/10
ur score- 32/40 which is 80%..

you need to look out for wordiness, you verse had a nice flow in general but watch your word placement it can throw it off terribly.. but this time it didn't.. you had more personals, better bars.. even punches to follow your verse.. you came harder and your structure wasn't bad either.. good job..

However, both of you need to work on the things i pointed out within y'all verses.. good luck with this battle you too..

my vote/ paramik- brought the harder verse, took the win.. good luck you two..

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