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Old 09-16-04, 05:40 PM   #15
Epical
..Friends Change..
 
This was feedback posted for SUCC MACOKK

IP:

weak and complicated battle

punches-
personals- SUCC
multis- SUCC
multas- SUCC
wordplay- neither
flow- Thug

SUCC thank god u knew your closer wuz weak. um u had some good personals, did your hw on him. just keep elevatin. also if swearin throws your flow off than dont swear.

Thug i didnt understand one part of your verse, and i dont think u tried real hard. just threw sometin on, anythin that rhymed.

SUCC:
"Damn your raps are about as good as Ur ruff tuff thug jokes...
Fuck even if U called Urself 'dope' you wouldn't make me choke!..." nice personal.

Thug:
"k succ macokk no more cocks for u lol jus like jewPRIDE/
macokk all u gonna see is a mcglock oh oops i lied/" um ya. best i found. not much to look at.

v/SUCC if i could vote