Thread: BANG vs Raphael
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Old 09-16-04, 06:01 PM   #10
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This was feedback posted for Raphael

IP:

weak battle nigga.

punches- raphael
personals- neither
multis- neither
metas- neither
word play- raphael
flow- raphael

Raphael u need help in vocab. the only, the only, the only, repetetiveness. weak punches so really just elevate.

Bang u need help wit vocab too nigga. u barely had any punches in there if any, and work on your structure for those people who will count it against u.

Raphael:
"Only time U 'threw' punches was wit Ur fam,juss 'CUZ' U were 'FISTEN' em...
And the only way you could win.....is if U hacked my system!!" decent punch.

Bang:
I didnt find anythin worth repeatin.

v/raphael if i could vote