..Friends Change..
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This was feedback posted for Raphael
IP:
weak battle nigga.
punches- raphael
personals- neither
multis- neither
metas- neither
word play- raphael
flow- raphael
Raphael u need help in vocab. the only, the only, the only, repetetiveness. weak punches so really just elevate.
Bang u need help wit vocab too nigga. u barely had any punches in there if any, and work on your structure for those people who will count it against u.
Raphael:
"Only time U 'threw' punches was wit Ur fam,juss 'CUZ' U were 'FISTEN' em...
And the only way you could win.....is if U hacked my system!!" decent punch.
Bang:
I didnt find anythin worth repeatin.
v/raphael if i could vote
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