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Old 09-16-04, 06:05 PM   #18
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aight im not going to break each line down but heres the deal:
empire,lmao,nice opener ringo star line killed it,shit was fire man,the rest of your verse was fairly good but ya flow n structure was on key for the most part,your explanations were not needed at all,opener was the best line out've both verses..
paramik??>.......weak ass verse from you i was again expecting more from you,your punches were lame n did'nt connect you had nice flow,the moss line was straight dumb,
srry paramik but nothin stood out in your verse,maybe your closer but it was'nt enough..
empire got this cause of harder punches...no hate..jus be'in honest...return the favour honestly....
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!