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Old 09-16-04, 07:13 PM   #5
Epical
..Friends Change..
 
This was feedback posted for Lyriclesolja

IP:

close battle

punches- solja
personals- neither
multis- lost
multas- solja
word play- solja
flow- lost

Solja good hard punches and good punchlines. kept me chucklin. decent wordplay but no personals.

Lost i liked your verse but your punches werent as hard, so work on that. other than that just keep elevatin.

Solja:
"after this battle when he tryes to get wit a crew he wont lern,
they wont let him in cause i placed him on injured reserve," nice punch.

Lost:
"u drop soft, beat off your lines.......just`a make hard....
and ur lyrics are outta this world.................
............................when u hit the fuckin space bar!!" nice wordplay and punch.

v/solja if i could vote