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Old 09-16-04, 07:50 PM   #18
Epical
..Friends Change..
 
This was feedback posted for Infamuz

IP:

sad battle

punches- famuz
personals- famuz
multis- project (cuz he tried)
multas- neither
flow- famuz
word play- famuz

Famuz nice verse but you didnt have a great closer. gotta end it right.

Project u had multis which is good, but notin else. get some personals, and work on your structure its hard to read yours. it doesnt effect the rhyme, but i dont have time to have to read hard to get the flow right.

Famuz:
"if this battle is worth ya pride and honor, loot in this sitution/
just dont post up if aint redy to ride some fucking anilation/" nice punch. keep it up

Project:
"1 titty 2 titty 3 titty 4 how many tittys can you fit tru a door" lmao that is hilarious. not cuz it wuz good, exact opposite.

v/famuz if i could vote