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Old 09-16-04, 08:12 PM   #5
Kawn Flixx
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Voted For: Empire

ha empire your verse was funny as hell

his lines had some good wordplay and flow

vocab was nice also
strcu was easy to read

Paramik:
opener was wack
you only changed to letters to rhyme
flow was ok, but wordplay was bad

empire takes it easy

no hate
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=149782

return the favor on this battle pleaase

don't HATE vote
if ur planning to do it jus don't vote at all

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