Voted For: D. Cepth Shun
up- nah i dont like the bad structure/rhyme scheme and played punches. try to use more personals, peep the tutorials and look at some verses from vets.....3/10
d cept- ehh the punches was coo, not the shit but coo. structure was mad good, wordplay was there overall a pretty decent verse
.....6/10
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