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Old 09-16-04, 09:26 PM   #22
Epical
..Friends Change..
 
This was feedback posted for Street poet

IP:

so poets can rap

punches- street
personals- neither
multis- street
multas- street
flow- street
word play- street

Street nice drop. flow wuz on, punches hit hard, but no personals.

20 not bad verse just not as good as streets. just keep elevatin. also keep the flow goin, u fell off a few times.

Street:
''Yall Katz Iz Garbage Ya Level is Way Belo Mine Ur Wacknes Is Undefined-
Spit Dat Sizzlin' Shit.. Hotter then da Devil N the Sun Combined-" nice punch. keep em comin

20:
"I got arrows that will hit you in different directions//
Artillary shed smaller than your N Sync poster collection//" funny and decent punch.

v/street if i could vote