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Better than you..
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Voted For: Quick Witted
Quick Witted - this was an alright verse. ur structure was good and ya punches were felt. good personals. (i don't think bitchset is able to come to ya rescue) niceeee. the only thing i would say u need to work on would be expanding ur vocab.
Upfront - this was a good verse with better vocab then Quick Witted. some decent puunches there and meta4's. didnt really feel ne personals from this one tho but what u do have was alright. the structure was poor.
nice battle fellas.
i vote for Quick Witted. i think he left upfont- outback. haha.
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..ADLIB..
Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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