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Old 09-16-04, 11:04 PM   #21
Epical
..Friends Change..
 
This was feedback posted for the gifted one

IP:

quick battle

punches- gifted
personals- neither
multis- gifted
metas- gifted
word play- shotta
flow- gifted

Gifted nice verse. kept it goin wit the flow, and kept me chucklin. try some personals wit your verses though.

Shotta nice verse but not as many punches as gifted, and the punches were the same when it came to hittin, so quanity won it.

Gifted:
"messing wit me, ill end it quickly, if u die u lucky
In da ring, I cook deez chickens in boxes like fried Kentucky." nice wordplay and punch

Shotta:
"I'ma Put U In A Lyrical ''Full Nelson''..
Now This Over U Can Run n Tell Ya Friends U Got Beat Down By The True ''Gifted One''" good wordplay and closer.

v/gifted if i could vote