..Friends Change..
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This was feedback posted for Phantom
IP:
easy battle
punches- Phantom
personals- Phantom
multis- neither
metas- Phantom
flow- Phantom
wordplay- Phantom
Phantom nice verse, your closer wuznt as strong as the rest of the verse, but other than that just keep elevatin. Nice wordplay.
Ecko your verse wuz too elementary compared to Phantoms so work on that, and work on the flow. kinda goes off sometimes.
Phantom:
"what the problem here is, is that i really did respect ya crew...
all the way up to the point where i found that it included you...
homeboy youre not on level, floor, dopeness or grade...
and it dont mean you born sick, just cuz you were conceived with aids..." nice opener and punch, along wit word play.
Ecko:
"are you scared?...... well u know u should be*
look over ya shoulder cuz we cant even walk the same streets*" decent opener.
v/phantom if i could vote
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