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Old 09-17-04, 12:04 AM   #14
Epical
..Friends Change..
 
This was feedback posted for Eyvon

IP:

battle of the sexes (ryda does not represent all)

punches- Eyvon
personals- neither
multis- neither
metas- Eyvon
word play- Eyvon
flow- Eyvon
bitin (New!)- Eyvon

Eyvon u need to lay off watchin 8 Mile. "cause u c a world without me's like a mustart without tha Heinz/
i know i aint battlin no hardcore rapper, u just a Busta without tha Rhymes/" off 8 mile when he freestyles in the parking lot. u re worded it but still from it. other than that great verse, keep elevatin

Ryda way too elemntary, and u need to use wut u got, u went minimum. u need to elevate.

Eyvon:
"cause when i git heated, watch yo back cause i drop bombs/
my lyrics'll keep droppin yo ass off, i fight like i was in Vietnam/" nice punch

Ryda:
"eyvon your gona leave on the ambulance/
cuz as soon as you took that second glance i enhanced/
next time watch your stance cuz when i get it im taking my chance/" decent punch.

v/eyvon if i could vote